Friday, September 25, 2009

NYT's Jennifer 8. Lee Is Either Organizing A Massive Swan Heist, Or A Field Trip To Walden Pond.



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Anonymous said...

That's probably one of the funniest heds I've seen in a long time, but you've misplaced "either" and inserted a needless comma. "Either" should come behind "organizing" since the coordinate elements are "heist" and "trip."

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NYT's Jennifer 8. Lee Is Either Organizing A Massive Swan Heist, Or A Field Trip to Walden Pond.

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NYT's Jennifer 8. Lee Is Organizing Either A Massive Swan Heist Or A Field Trip to Walden Pond.

September 26, 2009 at 9:13 PM

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